David Cronenberg. Rabid
Rabid. David Cronenberg
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EXT. HILLY COUNTRY ROAD -- DAY

A large, black, powerful-looking motorcycle waits propped up

on its center stand on the gravel shoulder of a deserted

country road. The gold lettering on its tank and side covers

identifies it as a Norton Commando 850.

Two white Bell full-coverage helmets sit on its saddle, like

medieval jousting helmets.

Beyond the motorcycle, stretched out on a grassy rise, lie

Hart Read, twenty-six, and his long-time girlfriend Rose,

who is the kind of eighteen that often seems more like

fifteen, and once in a while like twelve.

At the moment Rose is definitely eighteen and in control of

things, producing tuna sandwiches with lettuce and mayonnaise

out of a string bag and pouring coffee, pre-mixed with sugar

and milk, from a small thermos flask. Read watches her play

housewife with vast amusement. Rose holds out a sandwich.

READ

What’ve we got, Rose? Steak on a

bun?

ROSE

Tuna with lettuce and mayo. You gonna

make trouble?

READ

Yeah. Big trouble.

He grabs Rose’s wrist and pulls her close. He looks her deep

in the eyes.

READ

I want steak.

Read kisses her full on the mouth. Rose drops the sandwich

into the grass.

READ

Steak.

They kiss passionately.

EXT. HILLY COUNTRY ROAD -- DAY -- ONE HOUR LATER

Read kicks the big Norton into life. Rose puts on her helmet,

does up the chin strap, and gets on the machine behind Read.

Read waits for her to get settled, blips the throttle, then

accelerates off the shoulder of the road, fishtailing slightly

in the gravel.

EXT. HILLY COUNTRY ROAD -- DAY

The Norton booms along the twisty two-lane road. The road is

clear and Read feels good. He opens the throttle even more,

almost becoming airborne over the crest of a steep rise, and

leaning the bike over in the corners until he scrapes rubber

off the footpegs.

Rose rides loose, completely at ease behind Read. She clasps

her arms around him loosely, always going with the motion of

the machine, closing her eyes in pleasure.

EXT. HILLY COUNTRY ROAD -- DAY

Further up the road, a neat white VW pop-top camper trundles

along in the opposite direction carrying a middle-aged man,

his wife, and their twelve-year-old daughter. They are city

slickers out for an autumn camping jaunt, and things are not

going well for them.

WIFE

(scrutinizing crumpled

map)

We passed it.

MAN

We didn’t pass it. I remember that

farm.

WIFE

We passed it. That farm comes after

concession road 12 and we were

supposed to turn at concession road

11.

KID

I don’t remember that farm, Dad.

MAN

We didn’t pass it. I very distinctly

remember that farm.

WIFE

If you would just stop this vehicle

long enough to take a look at the

map I will prove to you beyond any

shadow of a doubt that we...

MAN

(losing his temper)

All right!

The man swings the camper across both lanes in one furious

motion and slams on the brakes just before they go over the

edge of the road into a ditch bordering an open field.

MAN

You’re both right and I’m all wrong.

He slams the camper into reverse and backs up as far as he

can, then slams it into first and lurches forward, trying

vainly to make a clean three-point turn on the narrow road.

MAN

We’ll turn around and go all the way

back.

When the camper is stretched completely across both lanes of

the highway, it stalls. The man twists the key viciously but

it won’t restart.

MAN

Goddamn thing! Shoulda never sold

the goddamn station wagon.

KID

The station wagon used to use too

much gas, remember, Dad?

WIFE

You keep quiet when your dad’s in a

sweat, Valerie.

MAN

(still trying to start

the camper)

Goddamn thing. Shoulda never sold

the wagon.

Without warning, Read’s bike suddenly appears over the crest

of the hill just beyond the camper. The bike is nearing 100

miles an hour. The wife sees it first.

WIFE

Oh, Christ, Bob!

MAN

(looking up)

Huh? Oh, Christ!

There is no place for Read to go except off the road. The

bike shoots over the drainage ditch beside the road two feet

from the nose of the camper. The man and his wife sit with

their mouths open, watching through their front windshield

the bike fly through the air into an overgrown field, as

though it were happening on TV.

EXT. FIELD -- DAY

When the bike finally lands in the field, it hits down front

wheel first. The impact slams Read over the handlebars into

the trunk of a small but solid tree. Rose stays with the

machine for one complete cartwheel. The motorcycle ends up

on top of her, the tank across her belly. Before she can

move, the tank explodes into flames. The flames begin to

melt the plastic visor of her helmet.

EXT. EDGE OF THE FIELD -- DAY

The camper driver turns around in his seat and starts to

rummage around, looking for something to put out the fire.

His wife gets hysterical. She can see Rose trying vainly to

get out from under the bike.

WIFE

Oh, my God! She’s gonna burn! She’s

gonna die!

MAN

Where’s the kid’s blanket? Where’s

the kid’s goddamn blanket!?

EXT. TERRACE OF KELOID CLINIC -- DAY

Jackie, a cool blonde English woman in her early forties,

has been bird-watching from the clinic’s terrace. Something

startling attracts her attention.

JACKIE

I don’t believe it.

Lloyd Walsh, an actor in his late thirties in the Keloid

Clinic of Cosmetic Surgery for his second facial touch-up,

pauses in the middle of a sit-up which he is performing on

an exercise mat a few yards away. Walsh is wearing a blue

jogging outfit whose top bears the words ’JOGGING KILLS.’

His head is bandaged.

WALSH

What is it? You spot a rare tufted

tit-mouse or somethin’?

Jackie turns away from her binoculars. She has thin surgical

wires attached to the upper and lower eyelids of both eyes.

JACKIE

There’s a motorcycle burning in the

middle of a field. I think there’s

somebody under it.

Walsh jumps to his feet with exaggerated athletic vigor.

WALSH

Yeah? Lemme have a look.

Jackie hands Walsh her binoculars and points him in the right

general direction.

JACKIE

See that column of smoke? Just follow

it down to its source.

We look through the binoculars with him as he does so. Sure

enough, there is a bike burning in a field with someone

trapped beneath it.

WALSH

Wow. Lookit that!

He turns and begins to sprint for the stairway at the end of

the terrace.

JACKIE

Where are you going?

WALSH

Gonna tell the boys downstairs. It’s

right up their alley.

JACKIE

Oh.

(calling after the

disappearing Walsh)

Careful with my binoculars! They’re

very expensive!

INT. CLINIC BOARDROOM -- DAY

The three partners who own and operate the Keloid Clinic are

holding an informal meeting in the posh boardroom of the

clinic, with cigars (Cypher), cigarettes, coffee, and full

ashtrays much in evidence.

Involved are Dr. Daniel Keloid, a youthful forty-five, lowkey

but forceful, founder of the Keloid Clinic and extremely

successful society plastic surgeon; Keloid’s wife, Roxanne,

who is herself an MD and who was once a student of Keloid’s;

and Murray Cypher, the clinic’s accountant. Cypher is fortyeight,

dapper, generally enthusiastic, and believes

passionately in creative accounting.

It has apparently been a long and tiring session. Cypher in

particular shows signs of strain. His end of the table is

littered with pages of scratch pad covered with hastily

scrawled notes and figures.

CYPHER

As far as I’m concerned these guys

are completely legit. The bank is

just as convinced as I am. They told

me they’re willing to go all the way

with us. I’m telling you, Danny -- a

franchise operation for plastic

surgery resorts is one of those

magnificent, inevitable ideas.

KELOID

Banks are always quick to say that

when everything’s rolling easy. But

you can take it from me -- first

sign of heat from the medical

association, first cries of

professional outrage, and the bank’ll

call back its note and leave us

hanging by our thumbs.

ROXANNE

It’s not the financing that’s

bothering you, Dan. Your voice has

that edge to it.

KELOID

I’ve never denied it. I sure as hell

don’t want to become the Colonel

Sanders of plastic surgery.

CYPHER

Why not? Sounds great to me.

KELOID

I’ll tell you why not. Because it’s

unprofessional, unmedical, and

unsavory.

CYPHER

You thought of it.

KELOID

I was only kidding.

CYPHER

You were not. Besides, you want me

to go back and tell three of the

largest investment groups in North

America, ’Forget it. He was only

kidding?’

KELOID

(in only partially

mock despair)

Oh, God. It’s all gotten out of hand.

I can see it now: fifty enfranchised

Keloid’s Cosmetic Surgery Clinics

flung across the face of North America

like Holiday Inns. Next thing you

know, Do-It-Yourself Facelift Kits.

CYPHER

I like it. We could call it... we

could call it Suture Self.

(starts to scribble

madly)

No, I’m serious. I like that. There’s

got to be a way.

ROXANNE

All right, boys. I think we’re getting

a bit silly...

The office intercom on the table chimes and the voice of

Steve, an orderly, fills the room.

STEVE (V.O.)

Is Dr. Keloid there? It’s urgent.

KELOID

Yeah, what is it, Steve?

STEVE (V.O.)

There’s been a motorcycle accident a

few minutes down the highway here.

Looks like a couple of people have

been hurt. Should I take the van and

go get ’em?

KELOID

Yeah, sure.

(short pause)

Hey, wait a minute. Steve? You still

there?

STEVE (V.O.)

Yeah.

KELOID

Hang on till I get there, OK? I’m

coming with you. Meet you at the

garage.

STEVE (V.O.)

Roger.

The intercom chimes off as Keloid stands up to leave. Cypher

throws his pen on the table.

ROXANNE

(exasperated)

Oh, now, Dan. We’ve got a lot of

decisions to make...

KELOID

(leaving)

You and Murray work it out, hon.

Just make the pill easy for me to

swallow, OK?

He closes the door behind him, leaving Cypher and Roxanne to

their own devices.

CYPHER

Well, what do you think about facelift

kits, Roxy? I mean, they’ve got

abortion kits.

ROXANNE

(frustrated)

Let’s just forget that anybody ever

mentioned the idea, OK, Murray?

Cypher shrugs. It still sounds great to him.

EXT. CLINIC DRIVEWAY -- DAY

In the middle of a landscaped triangle of lawn stands a large

light-box-style sign which reads KELOID CLINIC OF COSMETIC

SURGERY. Along one side of the triangle runs a crushed-gravel

driveway at the end of which is a long, low garage just behind

the main building, which looks as though it might once have

been a small stable.

One of the three doors of the garage slides up and a van

peels rubber out of the garage, sliding a bit once it hits

the gravel. The van is set up inside and out exactly like a

standard big-city ambulance, but without any ambulance

markings. Instead, sedate white lettering on the doors reads

KELOID CLINIC, LTD.

EXT. FIELD -- DAY

Read lies crumpled at the base of the tree. The end of his

right collarbone is sticking out at a bizarre angle and his

right shoulder is hanging too low. Read has regained enough

consciousness to feebly undo his helmet with his left hand.

Beyond him, clouds of oily black smoke curl skywards from

the fallen Norton. Read can hardly focus his eyes on the

figures running toward them from the camper at the edge of

the field. He slips dreamily into unconsciousness.

INT. VAN -- DAY

The clinic van turns off a secondary road on to the two-lane

highway and accelerates furiously, tossing its occupants

around as it momentarily slews sideways.

In the back of the van are Steve, who is busily preparing

stretchers and oxygen, and Dr. Keloid.

Keloid prepares several hypodermic syringes while expertly

bracing himself against the motion of the van.

Steve finishes attaching a hose to a small cylinder of oxygen

and turns the release valve to test the oxygen flow through

the nose-piece.

STEVE

Well, we’ve got oxygen now, Dr.

Keloid.

Keloid watches the thin column of black smoke looming larger

through the windshield of the van. He reaches for a small

fire extinguisher affixed to the frame of the van and begins

to undo the clamps holding it there.

KELOID

I think we’re going to have to use

this before we get close enough for

the oxygen, Steve.

EXT. FIELD -- DAY

Rose has stopped moving under the flaming machine. The man

from the camper, running and stumbling over the uneven ground,

finally arrives, followed by his older son (who is about

thirteen). The man tries vainly to smother the flames with

his younger son’s blanket, but the heat is too intense for

him to get really close.

The man is almost in tears with horror and frustration. His

son just stares wide-eyed.

EXT. EDGE OF FIELD -- DAY

The clinic van bounces to a halt by the edge of the field

and the driver, the most junior of the clinic’s four

orderlies, jumps out and runs around to the back of the van.

The back doors swing open and Keloid jumps out with the fire

extinguisher in one hand and a small leather bag in the other.

He heads for the flames as the wife and her kid watch from

the front seats of the camper. The wife sticks her head out

of the window and points at the flames.

WIFE

(to Keloid)

They’re over there, Doctor! They

were speeding!

Keloid is soon followed by the two orderlies carrying a large

wheeled stretcher, which they have hauled from the back of

the van.

EXT. FIELD -- DAY

The man who was driving the camper is still making sporadic

attempts to beat out the flames with the blanket when Keloid

arrives and opens up the valve of the fire extinguisher. The

white powdery foam covers everything in a few seconds, killing

the flames easily.

MAN

(to Keloid)

I tried to put it out. I couldn’t

get near it.

Keloid kneels beside Rose. He takes a pair of scissors from

his bag and cuts the helmet strap under her chin. He slips

the helmet off her head with great care. Her long blonde

hair falls into a pool around her face, which seems remarkably

at peace and untouched: only a rectangle of black soot where

her helmet’s visor melted away and admitted smoke gives any

indication of what she’s gone through.

When the orderlies arrive, the man points out Read for them.

MAN

There’s another one over there. I

saw him movin’ around a minute ago.

KELOID

(to orderlies)

Might as well go get him. We won’t

be ready to move her for a few

minutes.

The orderlies trot off toward Read with their stretcher. The

man watches them leave, then turns back to look at Rose. He

shakes his head as Keloid gives her an injection.

MAN

Christ. I didn’t know it was a girl.

Is she dead?

KELOID

This isn’t embalming fluid I’m

shooting into her. See if you can

lift the machine off her. Use the

blanket around your hands. It’s hot.

The man wraps the blanket around his hands and begins to

half-pull, half-slide the Norton off Rose by the handlebars.

The orderlies go by on their way to the van with Read

unconscious on the stretcher.

As the bike slides away to reveal Rose’s abdomen, the man

recoils in horror.

MAN

My God.

EXT. COUNTRY ROAD -- DAY

The clinic van speeds along the road toward the clinic.

INT. VAN -- DAY

Rose is on the stretcher with intravenous tubes in her arms,

bottles hanging over her head, an oxygen mask over her mouth

and nose, and several layers of blood-soaked bandages and

surgical gauze over her abdomen. The senior orderly monitors

the oxygen flow, the IV levels, and Rose’s pulse, while Keloid

speaks to someone at the clinic over the van’s CB radio,

which has a telephone-style speaker/ receiver.

Read sits jammed into a small seat behind the driver, his

head back against the van wall, completely dazed. He is

conscious enough to wince in pain with every bump the van

hits, but he obviously doesn’t know where he is or why he’s

there.

KELOID

Roxanne? Yeah, listen. We’re going

to have to throw in everything we’ve

got. I know, but let me tell you

what we’re looking at. The gas tank

exploded over the girl’s abdomen and

I don’t know what she’s got left in

there. The man’s got a broken hand,

separated shoulder, concussion, the

usual. We can send him to the General.

But it’s definitely major surgery

for her, and right now. I know we’re

not, but we’ve got no choice. I’d

say she’s got a half hour to live

and it’s three hours to the nearest

serious hospital. It’s us or nobody.

Yeah. I hope I can remember too.

Well, they say it’s like riding a

bicycle.

EXT. CLINIC DRIVEWAY -- DAY

The van stops in front of the clinic and the orderlies jump

out. Keloid holds the bottles and the oxygen as the orderlies

unload the stretcher and roll it up the front walk of the

clinic, which is a spectacularly renovated old farmhouse --

all sandblasted auburn brick, pine, and cedar planking, white

paint and Vista Vision windows.

A group composed of patients and staff cluster around the

main doors of the clinic to watch as the stretcher approaches.

Nobody seems to notice Read, who has been left sitting in

the van.

INT. CLINIC ENTRANCE -- DAY

Lloyd Walsh holds open one of the main glass doors while a

nurse opens the other one. The secretary -- receptionist

abandons her phones and her sleek plastic desk/filing cabinet

module to work her way through the group at the doors in

order to take a look.

Walsh makes room for the secretary -- Sheila -- beside him.

Rose is wheeled through the doors. Her condition is so

obviously serious and so different from the usual ’touch-up’

jobs done at the Keloid Clinic, which has a carefully

calculated country resort atmosphere about it, that everyone

becomes completely silent as she enters.

KELOID

(to nurse at door)

Get the guy in the van into

observation and check him out. But

take it easy -- concussion, separated

shoulder, broken hand. OK, Louise?

Maybe some Demerol when he becomes

lucid.

LOUISE

OK, Dr. Keloid.

Louise leaves the door once the stretcher has gone by and

heads out to the van. Walsh lets go of his door and jogs

after her.

Jackie, still wearing sunglasses, shakes her head as she

watches the stretcher go off down the hall and turns to the

middle-aged lady standing next to her.

JACKIE

What a waste. She doesn’t even need

a nose job.

INT. CLINIC HALLWAY -- DAY

The orderlies wheel the stretcher down a hallway which was

patently never meant to be used as a hospital corridor: Rose

is getting a very rough ride. As they move along they pass

various patients who react with shock and horror when they

see Rose. The Keloid Clinic is usually more discreet about

blood than a normal hospital.

MAN

(as Rose passes)

Jesus wept! What’s that all about?

WOMAN

Somebody said something about an

accident.

MAN

(repulsed)

Couldn’t they throw a sheet over it

or something? I’m starting to feel

like I’m in a hospital.

The fastidious man and his companion go through some doors

which, according to an elegantly lettered sign on a wall,

lead to a squash court.

The orderlies stop in front of another set of doors. Keloid

hands one of them the bottles he has been holding as a second

nurse, Rita, comes out to meet them. Rita is a very solid,

square-bodied, fortyish lady.

KELOID

OK, boys. Take her into pre-op and

tell Dr. Karl to set her up for the

works.

INT. SURGICAL WASH-UP -- DAY

Keloid and Roxanne wash with disinfectant in preparation for

Rose’s operation, aided by a third orderly whom we have not

seen before.

Roxanne is short, dark, intense, and ambitious beyond her

present practice. She does not wear her thirty-seven years

particularly well, so the age difference between her and her

husband seems more theoretical than anything else. She is

very particular about being called by her maiden name and is

known as Dr. Rushton to all the clinic’s patients. At the

moment, Keloid and Roxanne are having a very controlled, lowkey

argument which Roxanne tries to keep the orderly from

hearing.

ROXANNE

I don’t buy it, Dan.

KELOID

You haven’t seen her.

ROXANNE

I don’t have to see her. Neutral

field grafts have never been used

internally. We could end up with a

terminal cancer patient on our hands.

KELOID

Aw, c’mon. We can monitor, Roxy.

She’s got nothing to lose. Literally.

She doesn’t have enough small

intestine left to absorb nutrient.

If we just close her up she’ll have

to be fed intravenously for the rest

of her life, which will be a short

and a dismal one. But if we graft

neutral field tissue cones into the

abdominal cavity, there’s a chance

that they’ll read her condition by

post-embryonic induction and develop

into a new set of intestines.

ROXANNE

Or run wild and make some very

creative malignant tumors. Dan, the

clinic doesn’t need this. Let’s play

it safe.

Keloid doesn’t respond. He finishes snapping on his surgical

gloves and turns to the scrub-nurse, who helps him on with

his sterilized operating tunic.

INT. OBSERVATION ROOM -- DAY

Read has regained full consciousness in the clinic’s

observation room and is watching Louise cut away his wellworn

leather motorcycle jacket with a pair of snub-nosed

surgical scissors. She cuts her way up the right sleeve to

the shoulder, then across the shoulder to the collar. She is

then able to slip the jacket easily away from Read’s right

shoulder, which is still very obviously not where it should

be. She now starts in on his Norton T-shirt, which is all he

was wearing underneath his jacket.

READ

Oh, no. Not the T-shirt. Rose gave

me the T-shirt.

LOUISE

I think you’d find it pretty painful

trying to take if off the standard

way.

Read makes an attempt to slip his arm out of his T-shirt but

immediately gives up, grimacing in pain.

READ

No, look. I think I can... Ow! Oh!

You’re right. Cut the thing off.

I’ll put it up on the wall of my

garage.

Louise continues snipping off the T-shirt.

READ

So when do I get to see Rose?

LOUISE

Not for a while.

READ

Why not?

Louise doesn’t answer.

Read pulls away from Louise and tries to stand up. He can’t

keep his balance and falls back against the wall, banging

his wrecked shoulder.

READ

I want to see her right now! Ow! Oh,

God. I didn’t kill her, did I?

Louise reaches for a syringe of Demerol.

LOUISE

She’s not dead.

READ

What is that stuff? I don’t want you

to put me out.

LOUISE

It’s just Demerol. It’ll ease the

pain. All right?

Read lets Louise take his good arm. She swabs him down and

sinks the needle in.

READ

(sarcastically)

Sure. Wonderful. Anything to ease

the pain.

INT. OPERATING ROOM -- DAY

Keloid and Roxanne are well into their operation on Rose,

assisted by a team of five which includes Dr. William Karl,

the clinic’s anesthetist. Keloid and Roxanne are in the

process of cutting large squares of skin from Rose’s thighs.

KELOID

Now, I know everyone here is familiar

with the standard techniques of skin

grafting, but what we’re going to do

is a little out of the ordinary.

I’ll explain it as we go. We’re

removing full-thickness skin grafting

material from the patient’s thighs

as per normal graft acquisition

procedure. However, before these

grafts are applied to the damaged

areas of the patient’s breasts,

abdomen, and so on, they will be

treated so that they become

morphogenetically neutral. They are

then called neutral field grafts.

KARL

Can we treat the graft material here,

Dr. Keloid?

KELOID

No, Dr. Karl. The graft tissue will

be frozen and sent to the Sperling

Institute. We’ll have to keep the

patient in an operation-ready state

until it comes back to us. That’s

going to be a bit trying for all of

us, but it can’t be helped.

As Keloid speaks, the sections of thigh skin are placed in

spun aluminum cylinders of the same general type as those

used in eye banks. The cylinders are then sealed and placed

in a medical freezer.

RITA

I don’t understand the functional

difference between neutral field and

normal graft tissue, Doctor.

KELOID

Well, when the thigh skin tissue is

treated, Nurse Benedetto, it’ll lose

its specificity as both thigh tissue

and skin tissue. For example, if it

were grafted to a burned cheek, it

wouldn’t just be thigh skin with the

color and texture of thigh skin --

it would actually develop as facial

tissue. In other words, neutral field

tissue has the same ability to form

any part of the human body that the

tissue of a human embryo has.

KARL

Doctor, this patient has lost most

of her absorptive intestinal mucosa.

Could neutral field tissue reconstruct

an organ as complex as the small

intestine.

KELOID

Yes, Dr. Karl. I think that under

the right circumstances it could.

I’ve done it myself using lab animals

at the Sperling Institute.

Keloid and Roxanne exchange glances, then Keloid looks away.

KELOID

Let me add that there is always a

possibility that carcinomas will

form when neutral field grafts are

used internally. In this case, we’re

using a radical plastic-surgery

technique to compensate for our lack

of heavy medical hardware. We’re

doing it to save a life. It’s the

only trick we’ve got.

EXT. KELOID CLINIC -- DAY

Wide shot of exterior front of the Keloid Clinic in late

autumn.

SLOW DISSOLVE TO:

EXT. KELOID CLINIC -- ONE MONTH LATER -- DAY

Same shot as previous scene, one month later. Snow is on the

ground and the trees are bare.

SLOW DISSOLVE TO:

INT. ROSE’S ROOM AT THE KELOID CLINIC -- DAY

Read stands over Rose’s bed, which is a very well-disguised

hospital bed (everything possible is done to keep the clinic

from feeling like a hospital). Read’s left hand is encased

in a wire cage which supports all his fingers. He is watching

Rose intently, who is still in a coma and is attached to a

battery of intravenous bottles connected to her by clear

vinyl tubes and IV needles. Read is particularly fascinated

by Rose’s eyes, which he can see moving around wildly behind

her eyelids.

He bends close, then kisses her gently on her pale, dry lips.

INT. CLINIC HALLWAY -- DAY

Nurse Louise walks briskly down a hall toward Rose’s room.

On her way she passes Judy Glasberg clutching a pocket edition

of The Life and Work of Sigmund Freud and strolling

thoughtfully in the opposite direction.

LOUISE

Hi, Judy Glasberg. You back again?

JUDY

Daddy didn’t think the new nose was

different enough, so I’m in for more

alterations. I keep telling him it

looks just like his, and he keeps

saying, ’That’s why I want you to

change it.’ I’m terrified to find

out what it all means.

They both laugh.

The two women part and go their separate ways. We follow

Louise as she opens the door to Rose’s room, which bears a

printed sign saying: INTENSIVE CARE, QUALIFIED PERSONNEL

ONLY.

INT. ROSE’S ROOM -- DAY

Louise enters the room in time to surprise Read in the act

of pulling back the sheet covering Rose.

LOUISE

Didn’t you see the sign on the door,

Mr Read? You’re supposed to register

with me before you come in here.

READ

I saw it. I guess I consider myself

qualified.

Louise edges Read away from the bed and covers Rose up again.

Her entire body is heavily bandaged, and almost every inch

of exposed skin has an IV needle taped to it. Louise begins

to moisten Rose’s eyelids and lips with various gels.

LOUISE

What are you trying to do, give her

pneumonia?

READ

I’m trying to ease my guilt feelings

by telling myself that Rose is getting

better.

LOUISE

(softening)

I see. Is it working?

READ

Is she getting better?

LOUISE

You’ve been here often enough in the

past two months to know as much as I

do.

READ

When do I get to see Dr. Keloid?

LOUISE

You never tell me in advance when

you’re coming. How can I make an

appointment for you?

READ

I never know in advance when the

next wave of guilt will hit me. I

want to see him right now.

LOUISE

He’s in a meeting.

READ

Tell him I forced you.

LOUISE

(leaving the room)

All right. But please... no touching

until she’s conscious.

READ

OK, Mom.

Louise makes a face and leaves.

INT. KELOID’S OFFICE -- DAY

Read sits across from Keloid’s desk in Keloid’s office, which

seems more like a successful PR executive’s office than a

doctor’s. While they talk, Keloid toys with Rose’s file, not

really ever looking at it: he is obviously very familiar

with its contents, and also in a very distracted frame of

mind.

KELOID

Well, as you’ve seen, Rose is still

in some kind of coma, sort of half

real coma, half normal deep sleep.

Could be weeks before she’s lucid.

READ

You don’t know for sure?

KELOID

No. Her body is still in a state of

total shock. She can’t possibly be

moved to a city hospital yet. Her

grafts seem to be healing well. We’ve

been monitoring the internal grafts

electronically and there is definitely

new tissue growth happening in the

abdominal cavity. Whether this growth

will mature into functioning

intestinal mucosa we won’t know for

quite a while.

READ

You mean if your grafts or whatever

they are don’t work, she’ll never

eat like a normal human being again.

She’ll have to be fed intravenously.

KELOID

That’s right. At the moment, she has

only enough small intestine to digest

the most basic nutrient material.

See -- the longer the small intestine,

the more complex the food that can

be broken down and absorbed by the

body as food. Cows have lots and

lots of intestines so they can eat

grass and other vegetable matter. We

have medium-length intestines, so we

can eat meat and a limited variety

of vegetable matter. Vampire bats --

the real ones, I mean -- have short

intestines, so they eat whole blood,

which is very easy to break down and

assimilate. Your girlfriend’s in the

same boat.

READ

What about her brain?

KELOID

Her helmet probably saved her from

brain damage, but until she’s fully

conscious...

READ

You won’t know that either.

KELOID

(throwing up his hands)

Hart, what can I tell you? There’s

no magic. Look, I’ve done my best.

You’re welcome to come here and keep

your vigil by Rose’s bedside any

time the mood takes you, but please

believe me, I will personally

telephone you the instant Rose shows

even the slightest signs of regaining

consciousness.

Read sighs, then shrugs with his good shoulder.

EXT. CLINIC DRIVEWAY -- DAY

Lloyd Walsh and Read stand in the driveway watching as two

orderlies load the burned and smashed hulk of Read’s Norton

into the back of Murray Cypher’s Ford station wagon.

WALSH

Jeez, when I saw that thing burning,

I never figured I’d be standing here

talking to you a month later. How’s

your hand?

READ

They’re taking the cage off this

afternoon. That’s when I’ll find

out. The pin stays in my shoulder

for another month, though. Doesn’t

seem to bother me except when it

gets damp.

Cypher comes hurriedly out of the front door, putting on a

suit jacket and stuffing papers into his attaché case at the

same time. He walks over to Read and Walsh and opens the

door of his car.

CYPHER

(to Walsh)

Hi, Lloyd. How ya doin’?

WALSH

Great.

Cypher gets into his car, slams the door, and pops the

passenger door open for Read.

CYPHER

C’mon, Hart. I got a pack of hungry

investors waiting for me.

Read gets into the station wagon as the orderlies slam the

rear door shut on the Norton. Walsh waves goodbye to Read,

who smiles weakly.

CYPHER

I hope you’ve got some friends who’ll

help you unload that pile of junk.

I’ve got a bad back. What’re you

going to do with it? Use it for an

ashtray?

He turns the ignition key and starts the station wagon.

READ

Giving it to a friend for parts. I

can hardly stand to look at it. Think

I’ll get back into go-karts.

Cypher laughs, waves to Walsh, and pulls away from the

driveway. Walsh smiles at them and turns back to the clinic,

patting himself absently under the chin as he goes.

EXT. CLINIC -- DAY

Wide-angle shot of the front of the clinic as Walsh goes

back inside.

SLOW DISSOLVE TO:

EXT. CLINIC -- NIGHT

Same shot as previous scene, but late at night. There are

only one or two lights on inside.

INT. CLINIC HALL/NIGHT NURSE’S STATION -- NIGHT

The night nurse checks her watch at her station, which is

little more than a desk, chair, and lamp placed at the end

of a hall. It’s time for her to make her rounds. She puts

down her magazine -- People -- and walks down the hall. At

the end of it, she disappears down a stairwell.

INT. ANOTHER HALL -- NIGHT

The night nurse walks past Rose’s room, pausing only for a

moment to glance in at Rose’s sleeping form. She then

continues on down the hall.

INT. ANOTHER HALL -- NIGHT

The night nurse walks past Lloyd Walsh’s door. There is a

PLEASE DO NOT DISTURB sign hanging from his doorknob. The

nurse notices that Walsh’s light is on and diffusing out

through the crack under the door, but she continues on down

the hall.

INT. WALSH’S ROOM -- NIGHT

Walsh is lying in bed reading The Life and Work of Sigmund

Freud, which he has borrowed from Judy Glasberg. His room,

like all the private rooms at the clinic, is furnished in

the style of the plushest, most modern jet-set ski lodges.

It’s easy to understand why patients extend their stays beyond

what is medically necessary, and just as obvious that the

Keloid Clinic management makes no attempt to discourage this

’home away from home’ attitude toward the place.

Walsh can’t get comfortable with the book, which he has just

started to read. He checks his watch. It’s 1.13 a.m. He’s a

little nervous about his operation tomorrow morning. He puts

down his book, gets out of bed, puts on his bathrobe, slips

into his slippers, and leaves his room to go for a stroll

through the deserted clinic.

INT. CLINIC HALLWAY -- NIGHT

Hands in pockets, Walsh strolls through the clinic, past the

lounge, the ping-pong table, the breakfast nook.

INT. ANOTHER HALLWAY -- NIGHT

Walsh rounds a corner that leads him past Rose’s door, which

still bears its INTENSIVE CARE sign. As he passes by her

door, he hears a muffled scream followed by a series of moans

and indistinct, angry shouts. Walsh opens her door without

hesitation.

INT. ROSE’S ROOM -- NIGHT

By the light of the full moon and the hallway, Walsh can see

Rose thrashing around violently in her bed, getting twisted

up in her sheets and ripping out her IV needles. As he

watches, one of her IV bottles, pulled off its stand by its

feed tube, falls to the floor and smashes to pieces, spilling

blood plasma everywhere.

Walsh now sees that the floor is littered with shredded bits

and pieces of surgical gauze and bandages, which Rose has

torn from her various wounds and grafts. The plasma begins

to soak into the debris surrounding the bed. Her torso is

still covered only by bandages, making her look like a mummy

jerking to life in the half-light of her tomb.

Walsh rushes over to the bed and quickly lowers the safety

railing. He then tries to hold Rose down by the shoulders to

keep her from pulling out the last of her IV tubes. When he

grabs her by the wrists, he notices that she is oozing blood

from where the IV needles have been pulled out.

WALSH

Rosie, Rosie, sweetie, take it easy!

You need that juice, sweetie. It’s

keeping you alive. Hey, easy, there.

Easy. That’s it. That’s a girl.

Under the pressure of Walsh’s body, Rose begins to calm down.

Her eyes, which have been open but staring and unseeing, now

begin to fill with consciousness.

ROSE

Hart? What are you... what are you

doing, Hart? Are we all right? Are

we...

WALSH

I’m not Hart, Rosie. Hart’s back in

Montreal waiting for you. I’m Lloyd.

I’m a friend of yours.

ROSE

Hart?

WALSH

Back in Montreal. Waiting for you.

He’s fine. He’s OK. I was just talking

to him this afternoon.

ROSE

Oh. I... I guess I was dreaming.

Walsh lets go of Rose’s wrists.

WALSH

I don’t think you were just dreaming.

You and Hart were in a really

spectacular motorcycle crash.

ROSE

A crash? Was there fire? Was there...

blood?

WALSH

Yeah. Plenty of both. You’re bleeding

right now.

(getting up)

I’d better get Dr. Keloid.

Rose grabs Walsh by the arm and pulls him back down on the

bed.

ROSE

No! Not yet. I’m all right. But I’m

freezing cold, and you’re so warm.

Hold me.

WALSH

Look, I think I’d better...

ROSE

Please hold me. I’m dying of the

cold.

Rose puts her arms around Walsh, who hesitates for a moment,

then puts his arms around her and hugs her for a moment.

ROSE

Oh, God, that feels so good.

Behind Walsh’s back, Rose pulls the last remaining IV needle

out of her left wrist.

WALSH

(a bit nervous)

Ah, look... you don’t even know where

you are, do you?

Rose pulls Walsh’s face down to hers, then slips her arms

under his and locks her hands behind his back.

ROSE

Sure I do. I’m here with you.

WALSH

Look, this is really weird. Are you

sure you know what you’re... Ow!

Feeling a sudden sharp pain, Walsh tries to pull away. Rose

won’t let him get up.

WALSH

Hey, I think I... I think I cut myself

or something. You got something sharp

in there with you? Ow! Oh, that hurts!

He makes a huge effort to lift himself off the bed, but Rose

hangs on to him and comes up with him. Blood is soaking

through Walsh’s bathrobe around the right armpit, like dark

red sweat.

He is moaning and sobbing as he strains to get away.

Finally, Walsh collapses on top of Rose, quivering and

whimpering. Rose sighs deeply and begins to stroke his head

affectionately.

INT. MISS OWEN’S ROOM AT THE CLINIC -- EARLY MORNING

Miss Beatrice Owen, a tough-looking maiden lady in her

fifties, sits on the edge of her bed pulling on a pair of

white gloves. She is wearing an immaculate morning outfit

which looks vaguely ’40s and probably is. One of her hands

has been twisted by arthritis and puts up quite a struggle

before allowing itself to be encased in its glove. She then

begins to use her teeth to pull on the other glove.

The second glove is only half-way on when Miss Owen hears a

desperate scratching and bumping at her door. She stops what

she’s doing.

MISS OWEN

Yes?

(pause)

Who is it?

After a pause comes more scratching, followed by the sound

of a hand feebly slapping on the door. With her second glove

still only half on, Miss Owen gets up, goes to the door, and

opens it.

The instant the door is opened, a ghastly pale Lloyd Walsh

slumps heavily across Miss Owen’s shoulders. The force drives

her back several steps and she screams with fear.

MISS OWEN

Oh, God save us!

WALSH

I’m sick. I’m sick. Help me.

When she realizes she’s not being attacked, Miss Owen steps

back from Walsh, but, unsupported, he starts to fall to the

floor. Miss Owen slips her hands up under his arms and guides

him unsteadily to the bed.

MISS OWEN

Mr Walsh! What on earth has happened

to you?

Miss Owen sits Walsh on the bed, where he crumples into an

awkward lying position. When she withdraws her hands from

under his arms, Miss Owen finds that her right glove is

soaking through with very watery blood.

WALSH

I don’t know. I can’t remember a

thing.

INT. EXAMINATION ROOM -- MORNING

Keloid and Louise examine Walsh, who lies half-naked on his

left side, his right arm stretched out over his head to expose

a deep, round, and still-bleeding puncture in his right

armpit.

Like everything else at the clinic, the examination room has

been designed and furnished with luxury and style in mind as

much as pure function. Even the cantilevered examination

light which Keloid is playing on Walsh’s wound is colorcoordinated

with the drapes, the chairs, the coat-rack, and

the enamel finish of the examination table itself.

KELOID

Were you sleepwalking? Could you

have fallen against something outside

and then come back in without waking

up?

WALSH

(voice still shaky)

I doubt it. Never done anything like

that before.

KELOID

(to Louise)

Get me some stuffing, maybe a sponge

or two as well. This wound isn’t

clotting at all. I think we’re going

to have to shoot in some coagulants

to get a scab to form.

LOUISE

Right away.

She leaves, closing the door behind her. Keloid takes a closer

look at the wound through a large, illuminated magnifying

glass.

KELOID

From what I can see, it’s a very,

very clean and precise wound. You

haven’t leaned on any picket fences,

have you? Kind with those little

spearheads?

WALSH

(unable to respond to

Keloid’s attempt at

humor)

No.

Keloid grunts, takes out a tongue depressor, and begins to

probe Walsh’s wound with it.

KELOID

Does this hurt?

WALSH

Can’t feel a thing.

KELOID

(surprised)

You can’t?

WALSH

My whole right side has no feeling

in it. Just this aching kind of

tingling.

KELOID

Hm.

Louise comes in carrying wads of surgical gauze, sponges,

etc. She puts them down and takes Keloid aside.

LOUISE

Dr Keloid? Kenny Kwong would like to

see you.

KELOID

Right now?

LOUISE

He says it’s very important. He’s

waiting in the hall.

KELOID

(confidentially)

OK. Listen... our friend here may

have had a stroke. I think the

General’s the best place for him.

But before you plug him up I want 10

cc of blood drawn directly from that

wound for tests. Then get Steve to

drive him into the city in the

ambulance. Tell him to take lots of

plasma with him. We’re going to have

to forget about the coagulants until

the General has a chance to do an

ECG on him.

LOUISE

Will do, Doctor.

Keloid leaves.

INT. HALLWAY -- DAY

Keloid steps out into the hall and joins Kenny Kwong, the

clinic’s senior orderly, a concerned-looking, graying Chinese

man of about fifty-five.

KWONG

Can you come with me, please, Dr.

Keloid?

KELOID

Sure, Kenny. What’s up?

They begin to walk briskly down the hall, Kenny leading.

KWONG

You told me to check around the

grounds to see if I could find out

how Mr. Walsh got hurt?

Keloid nods.

KWONG

I couldn’t find nothing outside. No

blood, nothing. Then Nurse Rita call

me. She find something. She tell me

go get Dr. Keloid. You see it, then

you tell us what happened.

They round the corner taking them into the hallway that goes

past Rose’s room. Kenny walks up to Rose’s door and knocks

sharply.

KWONG

Nurse Rita waiting for you in here.

After a short pause, Rita opens the door and ushers them

inside, closing the door behind them.

INT. ROSE’S ROOM -- DAY

Once inside the door, Keloid is shocked at the state of Rose’s

room. It is basically as we last saw it, except that Rita

has reattached Rose, who seems to be in a coma once again,

to her IV bottles.

The area of the wall next to the doorhandle side of the door

is smeared with bloody handprints -- Walsh apparently used

the doorknob to pull himself to his feet, then supported

himself by holding on to the wall and door moulding.

Rita leads Keloid over to the bed, while Kwong hangs back to

watch that nobody enters inadvertently.

RITA

Watch your feet, Doctor. The police

will probably want every little piece

of glass and strip of gauze exactly

the way we found it.

Keloid finds a place to stand next to the bed, checks Rose’s

eyes, then her pulse.

KELOID

Why do you think the police would be

interested in this, Rita?

RITA

Why, it’s perfectly obvious that

that Walsh fellow attempted to molest

the poor girl while she was still in

a coma. I’ve seen things like that

happen before. Maybe he was drunk.

KELOID

(drawing back the

sheet)

Hm. Her grafts have taken amazing

well. Probably won’t even have to

rebandage. Hm. I can’t even see any

scar tissue.

He lifts Rose’s left arm and presses around her armpit.

KELOID

Wow. I’ll have to have a closer look

at that.

RITA

Rejection problems?

Keloid lowers her arm and covers her with the sheet again.

KELOID

(standing up)

Don’t think so. Seems to be an extreme

swelling of the lymph nodes under

the arm. Could just be a local

infection that’s under attack, but

it’s quite a bump. And there’s some

kind of lesion there. Doesn’t seen

to be gangrenous, but...

He walks thoughtfully toward the door. Kwong stands waiting.

KWONG

Want me to clean up the mess now,

Doctor?

KELOID

(snapping out of his

train of thought)

What? Oh, yes. But save all the pieces

and scrape some of the dried blood

on to a slide. Maybe we’ll find

something out.

RITA

But Dr. Keloid... Mr. Walsh, he may

well be...

KELOID

(turning to Rita)

Rita, Lloyd Walsh wouldn’t do

something like that. He just wouldn’t.

And none of this explains how he got

his wound. I think a quiet, thorough,

and very private investigation is in

order. Don’t you?

Rita lowers her eyes.

EXT. CLINIC DRIVEWAY -- NIGHT

Wide-angle shot of the clinic in the dead of night. The moon

is full.

INT. ROSE’S ROOM -- NIGHT

In the darkness of her room, Rose’s eyes are open and staring.

She begins to pull the IV needles out of her wrists and

ankles.

INT. WHIRLPOOL ROOM -- NIGHT

In the whirlpool room, which contains three full-size

whirlpool baths, a bar, and a lounge, Judy Glasberg is taking

a midnight whirlpool bath to calm herself down. The room is

deserted except for Judy, but she seems to have no trouble

adjusting the controls of the bath to get it just right.

As Judy plays with the temperature controls, the door behind

her opens and someone enters, closing the door behind her.

Judy looks up, startled. Rose stands at the door in her fresh

clinic gown. For some reason, Judy suddenly feels vulnerable

in her skimpy bikini.

JUDY

Rose? Is that you? I thought everyone

was asleep. They told me you were

still in a coma.

ROSE

(approaching the edge

of the bath)

Oh, no. I’m doing much better now,

thank you.

She seems to be completely normal, and as childlike as ever

save for the hollows under her eyes. Judy positions her body

so that her nakedness is hidden by the swirling bubbles of

the whirlpool.

JUDY

It... it’s really weird to meet you

this way. I mean, I’ve never really

talked to you before. But I sort of

feel I know you, you’ve been around

here for so long. And I saw them

bring you in right after the accident.

ROSE

Do you mind if I get in with you?

I’ve been lying in bed for such a

long time, my body aches all over.

JUDY

Ah, well, I... does anybody know

you’re here? I mean, does Dr. Keloid

know you... you’ve regained

consciousness?

Rose climbs into the bath with Judy, gown and all.

ROSE

I don’t think so. Everybody seemed

to be asleep. It was a bit spooky

waking up and finding myself all

alone. I’m so glad I ran into you.

(with surprise)

Hey, know what? I think I can feel

the warmth of your body radiating

out to me through the water. I’ve

never felt anything like that before.

Judy starts to grope for her towel by the side of the pool.

JUDY

I think I’d better get out now. I’m

getting all wrinkly.

Rose floats over to Judy and takes her by the arm, interfering

with Judy’s attempt to get her towel.

ROSE

Oh, no. Not yet. You haven’t even

told me your name.

JUDY

Judy Glasberg. Nice to meet you.

Rose slips her arms up under Judy’s arms and hugs her tightly.

ROSE

Mm. It’s nice to meet you too.

Judy tries to gently disengage herself from Rose’s embrace.

JUDY

Oh, now, c’mon. You’re embarrassing

me. Let me put some clothes on and

we’ll have a few drinks or something,

OK?

When she realizes that Rose isn’t going to let her go, Judy

starts to struggle more seriously.

JUDY

Let me go, please! I want to get

dressed. Listen, to tell you the

truth, I think there’s still something

wrong with you. I think you ought to

let... Ow! Oh! Something’s cutting

me! Oh! It hurts!

She starts to thrash about madly in the water, still locked

in Rose’s embrace. They dip under the water, then come up

again, Judy gasping for air. Rose lets her move wherever she

wants, but keeps her arms locked about Judy, her hands now

digging into Judy’s shoulders from behind.

In tight close-up we see something joining the two bodies

under the arms, from Rose’s left to Judy’s right. Even closer,

we see something fleshy slipping in and out of some kind of

sheath, barbs cutting through flesh, blood beginning to draw

along a fleshy translucent tube. From small glands at the

base of the tube, dark green fluid, almost black, begins to

flow into the blood drawn up the tube. The mixture of blood

and green fluid pumps back and forth in the tube.

Judy is now moaning in spasms, her head arched back as far

away from Rose as possible, her hair floating in the water

behind her and forming spirals in the whirlpool.

Rose holds on to Judy for dear life, her eyes closed in

ecstasy, her cheeks unnaturally flushed. She doesn’t notice

that Judy’s head is beginning to slip beneath the surface of

the water. Judy’s body is wracked by one final spasm, then

she relaxes completely, her head going under completely. The

last bubbles of air from her lungs mix with the bubbles spewed

out by the whirlpool oxygenator. After a few moments, Rose

releases Judy. We see a close-up of the translucent fleshy

tube, now empty of blood, sliding back into its sheath.

It is only after she has backed away and taken several souldeep

breaths that Rose notices Judy’s face is two inches

below the surface of the water, the tip of her nose almost

breaking through to the air but not quite. Rose frantically

grabs Judy by the hair and pulls her out of the water. Judy

isn’t breathing.

Rose manages to drag Judy to the edge of the pool, clambers

out on to the side, then pulls Judy out on to the pool siding

with her, Judy trailing a thin trickle of blood in the water

behind her.

Rose holds Judy’s mouth open and tries to revive her using

mouth-to-mouth resuscitation, but it’s no good. Judy is dead.

Rose shakes her head and starts to cry.

ROSE

Oh, no! No!

Rose shakes Judy’s corpse hysterically, then collapses across

it, sobbing. After a moment, she gets up, visibly fighting

for control. She sets her jaw and begins to drag Judy’s body

out of the whirlpool room.

INT. READ’S GARAGE IN MONTREAL -- NIGHT

In the ramshackle garage behind the small house he has rented

in Montreal, Hart Read has finally gotten around to trying

to put his demolished Norton back together again. The engine

has been removed from its frame and sits before him on a

metal-topped work table, and Read is in the process of

completely dismantling it. Small cardboard cartons of various

sizes sit on the table, waiting to receive individual pieces

of the engine.

The radio hung above the table is tuned to an FM rock station

which is on full blast, even though it is about 1 a.m.

INT. READ’S KITCHEN -- NIGHT

In Read’s kitchen, the telephone is ringing, but Read has no

chance of hearing it. Next to the phone, pinned to a cork

message board with colored plastic drafting pins, are several

photos of Read and Rose enjoying happier times.

INT. CLINIC LOUNGE -- NIGHT

Rose listens to the phone ring at Read’s from the telephone

in the deserted main lounge. Her hair is wet and matted and

she is shivering uncontrollably. She lets it ring, huddling

in her chair.

INT. OBSERVATION WARD AT GENERAL -- NIGHT

Lloyd Walsh is in the process of pulling on his pants in the

observation ward of the General, which he shares with a

thirtyish traffic-accident victim. Walsh’s Lufthansa flight

bag is already packed and ready to go, sitting on his bed in

the shadow of an IV blood plasma bottle.

VICTIM

Hey, you can’t leave yet, Lloyd.

They haven’t figured out how come

you’re bleeding all over the place.

WALSH

Aw, it’s slowed down to a trickle.

No problem.

VICTIM

How’s your arm?

WALSH

It’s fine.

He picks up his bag and opens the door without hesitation.

VICTIM

If the night nurse comes around,

I’ll tell her you’re in the can,

how’s that?

WALSH

Terrific. Take care of yourself.

He leaves, closing the door behind him.

INT. CORRIDOR AT GENERAL -- NIGHT

Walsh walks briskly down a corridor which leads to the main

entrance of the Montreal General Hospital, flight bag in

hand. Nobody stops him.

EXT. GENERAL ENTRANCE -- NIGHT

Walsh leaves the General and walks around the circular

driveway to the street, where he is just in time to pick up

a cab being paid off by a night orderly arriving for work.

Walsh gets in the cab and it pulls away from the curb.

INT. CAB -- NIGHT

Walsh leans his head back against the back seat as the cab

pulls away. He rolls his head from side to side, as though

trying to shake off a headache.

EXT. MONTREAL STREETS -- NIGHT

The cab moves through the streets of Montreal and enters a

ramp leading eventually to the Decarie Expressway. The cab

accelerates to the speed limit.

INT. CAB -- NIGHT

The nasal, wailing voice of a popular singer blares from all

four speakers in the cab. Walsh is now sitting quite still

in the back seat, head resting against the seat back.

CAB DRIVER

Hey, Mister, you wanna sleep? I can

turn the radio off. It’s a long way

to Camelford.

Walsh doesn’t answer. The driver looks in his rear-view

mirror. Walsh is slumped in the shadows of the back-seat

area.

CAB DRIVER

Hey, Mister. You want me to turn the

radio off? Or maybe if you want I

can turn off the back speakers and

just leave on the front ones...

He turns around in his seat to look at Walsh. His words die

on his lips. Walsh is staring at him with eyes that have

completely clouded over so that the whites of his eyes are

indistinguishable from the irises and pupils. Dark green

foam is drooling from the corners of Walsh’s mouth.

The cab driver doesn’t have a chance to react any further

before Walsh attacks him viciously, grabbing him by the

shoulders and biting the cab driver on the cheek.

EXT. EXPRESSWAY -- NIGHT

The cab carrying Walsh veers crazily across three lanes of

the nearly deserted expressway.

INT. CAB -- NIGHT

The cab driver tries madly to pull himself around in his

seat so that he can see where he’s going, screaming in pain

all the while. With one tremendous jerk he frees his face

from Walsh’s locked jaws.

EXT. EXPRESSWAY -- NIGHT

The cab finally slews completely out of control, smashes

into the low concrete railing lining the expressway,

cartwheels over the railing, and falls on to the expressway

ramp some twenty feet below, where it is rammed by an immense

diesel truck delivering furniture to a sub-urban warehouse.

The cab is pushed fifty yards along the rampway, shedding

pieces of bodywork and glass all the way, before the truck

manages to stop.

INT. THE KELOIDS’ BEDROOM AT THE CLINIC -- NIGHT

The telephone on the night table beside the Keloids’ double

bed starts to ring. Dan Keloid rolls over, fumbles for the

receiver, and finally gets it off the hook and up to his

ear. Roxanne stirs beside him in bed.

KELOID

Yeah. Yeah. No. No, you’re kidding.

Dead? Yeah. No, I would have

absolutely no objections to an

autopsy. It’s definitely indicated.

No, I’ve got nothing to add to my

telephoned report. We never came up

with anything else. Yeah. Right. OK.

’Bye.

He hangs up the phone in a state of drowsy excitement. Roxanne

rolls over and puts her arm around him. Keloid picks up his

wrist-watch to check the time. It’s 3.07 a. m.

ROXANNE

What is it, Dan?

KELOID

Lloyd Walsh is dead.

Roxanne starts to snap out of her sleep.

ROXANNE

He’s what?

KELOID

He left the General about an hour

ago. Told another patient he felt

all right. He took a cab and the cab

crashed on a highway. Both occupants

dead.

ROXANNE

Oh, God. Poor Lloyd. But you said

something about an autopsy? Was the

cab driver drinking?

KELOID

No, it’s Walsh. They’re not happy

with his corpse.

(baffled)

Something about the eyes... I’m going

to have to go over Walsh’s file again.

It just doesn’t add up.

EXT. COUNTRY ROAD -- NIGHT (APPROX. 4 A.M.)

By the light of a full moon, Rose walks purposefully down a

dirt country road, a borrowed windbreaker pulled tightly

around her over her clinic gown and hospital slippers starting

to come apart on her feet. She is determined to get as far

away from the clinic as she can by morning light.

DISSOLVE TO:

EXT. COUNTRY ROAD -- NIGHT (APPROX. 4 A.M.)

Rose finds herself walking beside a moonlit field with a

ramshackle barn at one end. She pauses beside the barn for a

moment, then slips under the fence surrounding the field and

makes her way gingerly across the muddy barnyard toward the

door of the barn. The house nearest the barn is dark. Rose

gently edges open the door of the barn.

INT. BARN -- NIGHT

Once inside the barn, Rose feels around for a light switch.

She finds it without much trouble and flicks it on. The barn

is low and full of cobwebs, and houses only two solemn cows

and a scraggly chicken.

Rose heads for the nest of straw that the two cows have made,

and gradually snuggles her way in between them.

She starts to stroke the side of one of the cows, getting

the animal accustomed to her touch, at the same time carefully

slipping out of her windbreaker. She then raises her left

arm and presses her left armpit flat against the cow’s side.

After a pause, she gives a short, sharp push with her left

side, as though she’s pushing something into the cow with

her body. The cow responds by lifting up its head and turning

to look at her. Satisfied that nothing too threatening is

happening, it turns back and lowers its head again.

Rose stretches out over the cow in ecstasy. Her eyes are

closed. Blood begins to flow in a rapid, one-way stream from

the cow into Rose.

She is breathing rapidly and heavily. Suddenly, she pulls

away from the cow, giving us a chance to see a flash of some

kind of elongated, tube-like organ retracting under her left

arm, dripping blood from its tip. As Rose lurches to her

feet, we can see a small, deep wound leaking blood and green,

bile-like fluid in the cow’s side where Rose’s armpit had

been pressed. The cows stir in reaction to Rose’s violent

movement.

She staggers away from the cows, dizzy and nauseous. She

manages to reach the stalls, which she leans on for support,

before she begins to vomit.

Suddenly, the door bangs open and a drunken old farmer

stumbles into the barn, a whisky bottle in his hand.

FARMER

All right, you! Hold it right there!

(spotting Rose)

Oh. Whatta we got here? Hello, sweet

honey pie. What’re ya drinkin’? You

come in to get outta the cold?

He waves the bottle at Rose as he approaches her, then puts

his arm around her so that the bottle rests on her chest.

FARMER

I got something ya can take a drink

off of, an’it ain’t no whisky,

neither.

He laughs coarsely and kisses Rose on the neck. When she

fails to resist him, he drops his nearly empty whisky bottle

and starts to nuzzle her collarbone. Rose wearily slips her

hand up behind the farmer’s head and pulls it down toward

her left armpit.

FARMER

(surprised)

Hey, that’s real nice, honey pie.

You like me, don’t ya? I kin tell ya

do.

The farmer is slobbering happily around Rose’s shoulder when

she suddenly grabs his head by the hair with both her hands

and pulls him viciously down on the cutting points of her

bloodsucking organ.

The farmer screams in agony. Rose holds the farmer’s head

down until he stops screaming and starts breathing heavily,

spasmodically. Then she lets him go.

The farmer straightens up. He is holding his hand over his

right eye. Rose is terrified at what she’s done. With a

horrified sob, she backs away, then turns and runs, stumbling,

out the door, leaving the farmer to stand swaying in a semianesthetized

stupor in the middle of the barn.

INT. READ’S KITCHEN -- NIGHT (5.14 A.M.)

Read has fallen asleep at his kitchen table while working on

the engine of his Norton. The partially dismantled engine

sits on a section of newspaper on the kitchen table next to

a half-empty cup of coffee and an open, grease-smeared Norton

Owner’s Manual.

He is awakened out of his deep sleep by the sound of the

kitchen phone ringing. Read jumps up, still half asleep,

almost knocking over his chair in the process. It takes him

a second or two to realize that he is in fact at home.

Read grabs for the phone, somehow terrified that the person

on the other end will hang up before he answers.

READ

Hello?

(suddenly very excited)

Rose? Is it really you? How come

you’re... I mean, the last time I

saw you... Oh, God. Rose, are you

all right?

INT. CLINIC LOUNGE -- NIGHT

In the main lounge of the clinic, Rose kneels beside the

table on which the lounge phone rests, cradling the receiver

in her hands. She is covered with blood, her gown has been

ripped, and she is close to hysteria. Her feet are covered

with dirt and she’s tracked mud inside, marking her trail

from the clinic’s back door clearly.

ROSE

Hart? Oh, Hart.

(sobbing)

No, no, I’m not all right. I’m in

terrible trouble. I want you to help

me.

READ (V.O.)

What are you talking about? Rosie,

calm down, I can hardly understand

what you’re saying.

ROSE

Hart, can you hear me?

READ (V.O.)

I can hear you, Rosie.

ROSE

Hart, you’ve got to come and get me.

You’ve got to come and get me as

fast as you can.

She suddenly becomes aware of someone else’s presence in the

lounge. She turns with a start. Rita, who is acting as night

nurse, is standing right behind her, a shocked and unbelieving

look on her face.

INT. READ’S KITCHEN -- NIGHT

READ

Rose, don’t panic. Whatever’s wrong

I’ll be able to help you, understand?

Now, I can be at the clinic first

thing in the morning, OK? I’ll get a

lift from somebody, I’ll take a cab

if I have to. Rose? You still there?

ROSE (V.O.)

(strangely subdued)

I’m still here.

READ

Rose, tell me what’s wrong. Please.

I’m going crazy here.

ROSE (V.O.)

I can’t talk now. See you soon.

Read is suddenly left holding a receiver humming a dial tone.

He waits only a second or two before he starts to look

frantically for the phone number of the Keloid Clinic in the

small book hanging from a nail by the phone.

READ

(thumbing through the

book)

Christ! What was the number of that

place?

INT. KELOID’S OFFICE -- NIGHT (5.30 A.M.)

Keloid is sitting at his desk in his bath-robe and slippers,

looking into a microscope holding a dry slide of Walsh’s

blood. There is a knock at his door. Keloid looks up as Rita

enters, closing the door behind her.

KELOID

Hi, Rita. I couldn’t sleep. I’ve

been trying to figure out what there

could possibly be in Walsh’s blood

that would cause...

RITA

(interrupting with

quiet urgency)

Doctor, I think you’d better come

with me.

INT. CYPHER’S LIVING ROOM IN DORVAL -- NIGHT

A groggy Murray Cypher sits on a sofa in front of the TV set

in his living room, trying to get his four-month-old son to

drink his 6 a.m. bottle. The images of the early morning

show -- the sound has been turned off -- seem to attract the

baby more than the bottle does.

To Cypher’s complete surprise, the telephone starts to ring.

CYPHER

Oh, no. I just don’t believe it. OK,

Jeffrey -- you’re on your own for a

second.

Cypher tries to prop the kid up between two cushions, but he

starts to cry the instant Cypher lets go of him. Cypher picks

him up and takes him over to the phone, which is on a shelf

at the other end of the room.

CYPHER

No? You want in on the action? OK,

let’s go.

Cypher picks up the phone.

CYPHER

(annoyed)

What could you possibly want at this

hour of the morning?

INT. READ’S KITCHEN -- NIGHT

READ

Murray, it’s Hart Read. I hate like

hell having to bother you like this,

but I’m going out of my skull. It

has to do with the clinic.

CYPHER (V.O.)

Yeah, OK. I was up anyway with the

baby. So what gives?

READ

I got this phone call from the clinic.

From Rose.

CYPHER (V.O.)

From who?

READ

From Rose. She’s supposed to be in a

coma. Keloid promised me he’d tell

me the second she showed signs of

consciousness and here I am getting

a call from her at five in the

morning.

INT. CYPHER’S LIVING ROOM -- NIGHT

Cypher is having trouble juggling the phone, the bottle, and

his baby, who is gumming the receiver and drooling into the

little holes at the speaking end.

CYPHER

That is pretty weird. But maybe she

came to in the middle of the night

and didn’t know where she was. Those

things can happen. Jeffrey, don’t

eat the phone. You’ll get indigestion.

INT. READ’S KITCHEN -- NIGHT

READ

But she said she was in trouble,

Murray. She wants me to come and get

her right now.

CYPHER (V.O.)

Look, Hart -- she’s confused and

she’s scared. Did you phone the clinic

back and try to talk to Danny?

READ

I did. I got to talk to a tape

recorder. I left a message.

INT. CYPHER’S LIVING ROOM -- NIGHT

CYPHER

OK. I’ll phone Danny right now at

his private number, and I’ll make

sure that he knows that your Rosie

is making phone calls in the middle

of the night. Then I’ll pick you up

at your place in an hour and we’ll

go up to the clinic together. How’s

that grab ya?

READ (V.O.)

Great. Phone me right back if there’s

a problem.

CYPHER

Absolutely.

INT. READ’S KITCHEN -- NIGHT

READ

OK, Murray. Thanks a hell of a lot.

Read hangs up the phone. He takes a close look at one of the

pictures of himself and Rose on the Norton.

INT. ROSE’S ROOM AT THE CLINIC -- NIGHT

Rose sits quietly on the edge of her bed, her feet dangling

over the side not quite touching the floor. She keeps her

head down and does not look at Keloid, who is conferring

with Rita at the door. Rita has given Rose a new gown and

cleaned her up a bit for Keloid.

Rita leaves and Keloid closes the door behind her. He turns

to Rose and approaches the bed, tapping his stethoscope

against the palm of one hand. He doesn’t say anything until

he sits down on the bed beside her.

KELOID

Rose... I’m Dr. Keloid. Dan Keloid.

I’m here to help you, sweetheart.

Rose lifts her head to look at Keloid for the first time.

Tears are streaming down her cheeks. She throws her arms

around Keloid and begins to sob on his shoulder. Keloid hugs

her gently and pets her on the head as though she were a

child.

After one or two moments, Keloid detaches himself from Rose

and lies her back down on her bed.

KELOID

Rose, we won’t talk about anything

right now except how you’re feeling,

OK?

Rose nods, still snuffling slightly.

KELOID

Good. First thing I want to do is to

check out some of the skin grafts we

did for you. Now, could you please

just slip your arm out of your left

shoulder strap and raise your arm

over your head?

Instead of doing as Keloid asks, Rose puts her hands over

her face and shakes her head. Keloid is baffled.

KELOID

What’s the matter, Rose? Are you in

pain? Talk to me, Rose. It’s the

only way I can understand what’s

bothering you.

ROSE

(from behind her hands)

I’m hideous, Doctor. I’m crazy and

I’m a monster.

KELOID

C’mon, Rose. There’s just about

nothing we can’t fix if we know what’s

wrong. Now, I don’t want any more

games. Do what I tell you.

Rose reluctantly takes her hands away from her face and slips

her left arm out of its shoulder strap. A pause, and then

she raises her left arm above her head on the pillow.

Keloid can barely suppress his surprise at what he sees.

Nestled in Rose’s left armpit is a fleshy, tubular lump with

an opening at the upper end of it. Keloid reaches over and

presses it gently with his fingertips.

KELOID

Does that hurt?

ROSE

No. It doesn’t hurt.

Keloid takes a closer look at the fleshy pouch. The opening

at the upper end seems to be surrounded by sphincter muscles.

Keloid gently spreads the opening with his thumb. Deep within

the pouch, something an angry pink color, something

glistening, seems to be pulsating. When he removes his thumb,

the muscles pull the opening closed again the way a drawstring

closes a bag.

Keloid sits up on the side of the bed again, trying to regain

his composure.

KELOID

(after a pause)

As far as I can tell now, it’ll take

just a very minor operation to remove

that growth from under your arm. It

may be some kind of external

intestinal tissue. The neutral field

tissue graft we did has been trying

to find a way to get food that you

can digest into your body. I was

hoping it would do that by providing

you with a regular set of small

intestines but it seems to have had

something different in mind.

Rose shakes her head. A baffled expression comes over Keloid’s

face.

KELOID

How long have you been conscious,

Rose? Do you know?

ROSE

Couple of days.

KELOID

Do you feel weak?

ROSE

I feel strong. I feel very strong.

KELOID

Rita tells me you refused to let her

attach you to your intravenous

nutrient bottles. Why?

ROSE

I don’t need them. They make me feel

sick.

KELOID

I don’t understand. They’ve got to

be your only source of food.

ROSE

They’re not. They haven’t been for a

couple of days. Not since that man...

KELOID

Man? What are you talking about?

ROSE

I’ll show you.

Rose puts her right hand behind Keloid’s head and draws it

slowly down toward her left armpit. When Keloid’s head is

about a foot and a half away from the organ, Rose grabs Keloid

by the hair with both hands and strains upwards with her

body.

Keloid emits a low, gurgling scream which soon cuts off with

the suddenness of a thrown switch. Exhausted of energy, Keloid

collapses across Rose, who begins to rock him gently from

side to side as she pumps the blood from his body.

EXT. KENTUCKY FRIED CHICKEN DEPOT -- MORNING (6.45 A.M.)

A battered old Ford pick-up truck pulls into the parking lot

of a Colonel Sanders Kentucky Fried Chicken depot beside the

two-lane highway leading to the Keloid Clinic. The door of

the truck opens and a vaguely familiar mangy dog jumps out:

it belongs to the farmer who was Rose’s third victim.

INT. FRIED CHICKEN DEPOT -- MORNING

The farmer enters the take-out depot, which is deserted except

for staff and one lone trucker. The farmer is wearing a pair

of crooked and cracked sunglasses. He is not very steady on

his feet. His dog watches with concern through the glass

door.

FARMER

(to counter girl)

One bucket of your best for me and

my dog there.

COUNTER GIRL

Yes, sir.

The counter girl conveys the order through the window into

the kitchen, then turns back to write up the farmer’s bill.

COUNTER GIRL

Yes, and will that be... Oh!

The girl’s words trail off as she notices a tear of blood

running down the farmer’s cheek from under the right lens of

his sunglasses.

COUNTER GIRL

Hey, Mister. Did you know you’re

bleeding?

The farmer dabs at his cheek with a tobacco-stained finger,

smearing the blood.

FARMER

It’s nothin’.

TRUCKER

Musta had a rough night, Buddy.

FARMER

Think I got in a fight or somethin’.

Can’t remember too good.

The man in the kitchen slaps a bucket of chicken down on the

kitchen-window counter.

KITCHEN MAN

One bucket ready to go.

The counter girl picks up the bucket and carries it over to

the trucker. She has just barely put it down when the farmer

grabs it and starts tearing the lid from it.

TRUCKER

Hey, Buddy. I think that one’s mine.

The farmer grabs a piece of fried chicken from the bucket

and starts wolfing it down. The trucker puts his hand on the

farmer’s shoulder and turns him around so that they face

each other, a piece of chicken skin hanging from the farmer’s

lips.

TRUCKER

I said... I think that one’s mine,

Buddy.

The farmer starts shaking uncontrollably.

FARMER

I gotta eat. I gotta eat. I gotta

eat...

TRUCKER

Take those glasses off so I can see

who I’m talkin’ to.

The trucker reaches out and takes off the farmer’s sunglasses.

To his disgust, he is confronted with one closed, swollen,

and bleeding eye, and one eye which has almost completely

clouded over from white of eye to pupil.

TRUCKER

What the hell...

Bits of chicken drool from the farmer’s mouth, followed by a

froth of dark green foam. Without warning, the farmer lunges

at the trucker and tries to bite his face. The trucker dodges

out of the way, catches the farmer by his jacket and swings

him over the counter, where he crashes into the counter girl.

As the kitchen man comes out of the kitchen with a pot of

boiling oil in his hand, the farmer grabs the girl and manages

to bite her on the arm before she can pull away. Green foam

dribbles into the girl’s wound.

Once the girl has pulled loose and backs away, screaming

hysterically, the kitchen man throws the potful of oil on

the farmer as he struggles to his feet. The farmer screams.

As the dog barks madly at the door, the trucker and the

kitchen man jump on the farmer and pound him senseless behind

the counter.

INT. SURGICAL WASH-UP AT THE KELOID CLINIC -- MORNING

Keloid and Roxanne are preparing to perform an early morning

facelift. They wash their hands and forearms and put on

surgical gloves as the scrub-nurse prepares their masks and

gowns. Keloid has a thick band-aid on his neck.

ROXANNE

You’re sure you want to do this one,

Dan? Louise and I could handle it

with no trouble.

KELOID

I’ll be fine.

ROXANNE

You were pretty groggy this morning.

(noticing band-aid)

Cut yourself shaving?

KELOID

I’ll be fine.

Keloid turns away from Roxanne to avoid further discussion.

The orderly begins to help him on with his surgical gown.

Keloid allows a pained, confused expression to take over his

face for a moment, then suppresses it.

EXT. SIX-LANE HIGHWAY -- MORNING

On a six-lane highway leading out of Montreal, Cypher’s

station wagon starts out on its journey to the Keloid Clinic.

INT. STATION WAGON -- MORNING

Inside, Cypher and Read sit bleary-eyed, both drinking coffee

from styrofoam cups with slits in their covers and listening

to the car radio in silence. The 8 a.m. news is in progress.

NEWSCASTER (V.O.)

...but there can be little doubt

that the issue of police brutality

will still be with us for some time

to come. And speaking of brutality --

an incident of violence that took

place over a Highway 11 fried chicken

take-out counter ended in the death

of one man and the wounding of an

eighteen-year-old girl. We’ll give

you further details on that story as

they become available.

Read and Cypher drive on to the sounds of a Radio Shack

commercial.

INT. CLINIC OPERATING ROOM -- MORNING

Keloid, Roxanne, Karl, Louise, and the scrub-nurse are in

the process of performing a routine facelift on a middleaged

woman.

Roxanne watches Keloid closely for signs of fatigue as he

makes the first cut under the woman’s chin with a scalpel.

Keloid’s hand is rock steady. He makes two more cuts and

rolls back a flap of skin. Everything seems to be under

control.

INT. STATION WAGON -- MORNING

Cypher and Read drive on, listening to the rest of the news

story.

NEWSCASTER (V.O.)

The man, later identified as fortythree-

year-old Fred Atkins of

Camelford, went berserk this morning

during an argument over who was to

be served his bucket of chicken first

and bit the counter girl on the arm.

The man was subdued by an unidentified

truck driver and the chicken place’s

cook, but died of unknown causes

before police arrived. Local health

authorities suspect that rabies might

be involved and have vaccinated

everyone concerned. The dead man’s

dog was destroyed on the spot. And

now, a brief pause for station

identification, after which we’ll

talk to a scientist who says that

earthquakes may one day become a

thing of the past...

While they listen to a variation of the Radio Shack

commercial, Cypher notices that they’re passing by the

Kentucky Fried Chicken depot. There are still two police

cars parked in the parking lot.

CYPHER

Hey, we’re right there.

READ

(drowsy)

Huh?

CYPHER

The place they were talking about on

the radio.

(joking)

Wanna stop off for some fried chicken?

READ

(not reacting to the

joke)

Not hungry, thanks.

Cypher is about to say something further, but realizes that

Read is too preoccupied with Rose to banter with. He decides

to let it drop. They drive off to the sounds of easy-listening

radio.

INT. CLINIC OPERATING ROOM -- MORNING

Keloid is now stitching up the flap of skin under his

patient’s chin. Roxanne notices that his hand is no longer

as steady as it was earlier on in the operation. He is having

trouble placing his stitches properly. His mask is soaking

through at the mouth.

ROXANNE

Do you want me to complete the

stitching, Dr. Keloid?

KELOID

I need... I need something to cut

with, Dr. Rushton.

ROXANNE

You want the scissors now, Doctor?

KELOID

Yes. The scissors now.

Roxanne’s brow is furrowed as she reaches for the scissors

on her instrument tray and hands them to Keloid.

ROXANNE

Scissors.

Instead of simply allowing the scissors to be placed in his

hand, Keloid grabs Roxanne by the wrist with one hand and

takes the scissors with the other. He turns to look at her.

She is shocked to see that his eyes have completely clouded

over. Looking into them is like looking down two dark holes.

ROXANNE

Dan...!

Without hesitation, Keloid takes the scissors and cuts the

tip of Roxanne’s index finger off. Roxanne stares down at

her bleeding finger, an unvoiced scream rising in her throat.

Keloid lets the scissors drop to the floor and pulls down

his mask. Dark green fluid foams from his mouth. He falls to

his knees and puts Roxanne’s index finger in his mouth,

sucking on it like a straw. Roxanne screams.

Louise, who turned to look at Keloid at the sound of the

falling scissors, screams in unison, backing away in terror

and disbelief. The operating room explodes in confusion and

panic as Keloid and Roxanne start to